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2.Checkthatyraphsfollowthesequeopics

&opicesraphsmustfollowthesamesequesofyourthesis.Ifthethesisawillcovera,b,andc,yourtopicesmustappearinthatsamesequence.Jumblingthesequeopicsmakesthepaperhardertoread.Ifyoudoopitheorderpromisedbyyourthesis,youherrewritethethesisorshuffletheparagraphssothatthetwosequech.

Activity2-2:Examihesis

Inthisexercise,youwillfiheleftopicsraphshtn.Discusswithyourpartopicsraphsfollowthesamesequeisihethesis.

3.Checkparagraphtransitions

Ifwepareaoatrain,theindividualparagraphswouldbeseparateboxeabeliooherbymorethansimplesequebytheloontheme,idea,ument.Whenrevisingyourwork,checkthatyraphsaretrulycoupledtogetherratherthansimplysittingsidebyside.

Notonlyceshouldbeachievedbeths,itisalsoimportantwithintheparagraph.Tomakeyt,youmustthinkraphasexpressingasiowhidividualseributebitsofmeaning.Youachievethisliheuseoftransitionalmarkersaences.

Activity2-3:Transitionalmarkers

&hefollole.Ideioeneachexampleahequestionsthatfollow.

Example1

Type-Apersonisforevernervousaboutis—alwayswantifearingfailure.AsanillustrationsiderHhs,thebrilliarepreedadustrywithgoodpotential,butshutitdhtbecausehisautomobileerfect.Suessistypicaloftype-Apeople,whooftehemselvesupforfailurebecausetheirbesteffoodenough.IntrasttotypeAs,typeBsprovidethemselvesoimismaude.TypeBsarethekindofpeoplewhostudyhoursforanexamanddopoorly,yettheystillfeelgoodaboutthemselvesbecausetheydidallthatossible.

Example2

AhainbiographysooerestedinBoswell’sLifeofJohnson.ItstaherbiographiesasShakespearestaherplaywrights:tabovethemall.Formorethauriesithasbeenuouslyinprint,andinthattimeithaswoninnumerableadmirers.Nraphyhasgivensomuchpleasure;nraphyhascreatedsuchavividtralcharacter.Ithasbeeatruismthat,asaresultofBoswell’sextraordinarybook,SamuelJoherknowntousthananyothermaninhistory.

Aswellasbeingafamousandmuchlovedbook,thelifeofJohnsonisaworkthatraisedfualquestionsaboutthenatureofbiographyitself.Isitpossiblefraphertofullyuandwhatitisliketobeanotherhumanbeing?...Isbiographysceorart?Historyorfi?

Boswell’sPresumptuousTask,AdamSisman

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1.Pleaseuransitionalmarkersineachexample.

2.Whatistheroleofthetransitionalmarker?

3.Therearemaransitionalmarkersbasedesandfuns.Couldyouthinkofmoreexamplestopletethefollo

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